For every rejection
every refusal,
Say,
Come closer.
For every tear
and blemish
and tremble,
Say,
Come closer.
In jagged light when
all the the angles are wrong
and disheartening,
fall
in Love.
Be the tender one,
the present and caring one,
alone with yourself.
In that freedom
none can knock you from place,
your sway becomes a spin
becomes a leap
becomes a Song
to which others find
their own dance.
Come closer
28 Thursday Aug 2014
Good structure, use of repetition, and flows well. Like it. I would appreciate if you had any feedback on my latest poem/lyrics. Thanks
Thanks for reading. I’d be happy to take a look when I’ve a moment. If any thoughts arise I will share with you~