Meeting rabbit at dawn,
her form nearly a shadow in gold grass,
voices of three owls cross overhead.
Bat descends swiftly from behind,
grazes ground,
flies sharply up past my cheek.
Rabbit hops closer, stands high on hind feet,
bringing a clear river of scent to her twitching nose and,
with offset ears, sits, scratches, and
washes herself.
Dark full-bodied mosquitoes harvest breakfast
from my backside.
Red-shouldered hawk cries dominantly
from the west,
lands on cypress crown.
Young coyote trots past.
Rabbit at dawn
08 Friday Aug 2014
This creates a very vivid image.
Happy to weave a story~
I enjoyed it. I try to keep my writing just as vivid, so I appreciate the work this took.
Thanks for reading. Glad to be among writers.